Once upon a time, zombies ruled the world. They lived in a lake of ice cream where marshmallows floated freely, and people used almonds for boats. But there was a 500 year old lady who lived under the water. She lived inside of a shark; his giant jaws were her front door. One day, the old lady swallowed a whole zombie. More people came to live with the lady inside of the shark, and they all wore black. There was also a flamingo who took notes with a Number 2 pencil who wore pink. But he got embarrassed because his mom, Mrs. Mermaid, called him sweetie. One day they all floated down a river of smoothies.
The End.
~generated collectively by the class
7 comments:
This is the best story I've read all week. Maybe even all month. I love how the marshmallows float freely and how the flamingo got embarrassed. One question: what was the flamingo taking notes about? What was he writing down with his #2 pencil? This story left me wanting to know more.
Nice work!
hey SCORES, its jessica from sanchez, i really dont remember making the story,anyways i thought it was cool!!!!!!!!
this story is so cool i wanted 2 know more
i want 2 know y that flamingo was taking notes... i still think its cool =] from jessie
dejanee here last weekend for the 1st time ever i tried rockie road. i remember when we wrote this story. it was nice working with u guys. u make writing seem fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuunnn!!!!!!!!!!!
What I liked about Zombie River was when the old lady that was 500 years old ate the whole zombie! I also liked that this story had marshmellows and smmoothies in it!
~by Yaritza
i love this story. but my fav part is the rockie road.
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